These are the
two thesis statements that I am considering to use in my paper:
1.
The
cultural differences in the business world have affected Melonboard’s style of
communication and by adapting to different audiences, being transparent to its
customers and partners by various writing styles, and providing excellent
customer service through different channels of communication, the company has
become a well-communicative company facing the world of teenage skaters.
2.
Clear
communication is the key to share information efficiently between the sender
and the receiver. By adapting the style, provide credibility, and know your
audience; the message can be structured in different ways to better apply to
the person receiving the message which will ease the understanding of the
information.
Hi Adam!
SvaraRaderaReading both of these thesis statements i would say they are both really great! I can really see what your paper is trying to relay.I personally really like the first one. I feel like this thesis statement really brings it all home and conveys the point you are getting across.